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Tony Burkinshaw's avatar

Online gurus drive me nuts.

You seem to agree 🤔

Ani Beeler's avatar

"and definitely/not shit" OMG hahaha

T.S. Morgan's avatar

Sneaking in the profane and/or scatalogical in the final stanza is a very…me move.

Ani Beeler's avatar

I admire it greatly. Continue on please 🫡

Brooklyn Crane's avatar

DEFINITELY!!👨🏻‍🦯

ryv 𓆣 ˚ ✶.'s avatar

i love how feisty your rage poems are HAHA. and as usual, earned - down with those who exploit a common anxiety - making a paid course seeming like a cure-all-antidote! thoroughly enjoyed this as someone who used to fall for the idea of missing a secret ingredient when the gurus invaded the timeline.

Brooklyn Crane's avatar

May I never charge for telling people how to rhyme. 🤺 That would be the ULTIMATE downfall.

James (HVR)'s avatar

Yes! Let those healing industry nonsensers have it!

Unless it works..

Brooklyn Crane's avatar

Placebo doesn’t count.

James (HVR)'s avatar

Ouch.

Well played.

The Raging Poet's avatar

Love reading collab works!

Brooklyn Crane's avatar

Will be posting more, then! 🤸🏻

Margaret C Nikoleit's avatar

What fun! And a topic worth making fun of. 😉

Brooklyn Crane's avatar

Thank you! We need more cinquains on here.

Kelly Trost's avatar

Hi Brooklyn and T. R.,

I love this! I’m glad I noticed on your page, Brooklyn, that my first comment didn’t stick. What I had said was something very simple, to the effect that I enjoyed it and found it a pleasure to read. Nice job.